First Reel ever
Posted 19 May 2013 - 10:03 AM
After a while of editing and waiting My First Reel was finally released.
Feedback is welcome.
Posted 19 May 2013 - 03:27 PM
welcome to the forum.
I think you've got a decent reel. There are a few issues. The biggest I think is your lack of controlling your horizontal lines. In clip two, this becomes very noticeable. But I'm guessing you know this and are training to avoid it.
There are a couple of shots with way too much headroom for my taste, but in time this will become better.
I liked the last clips in the forest. Slow moves with not a lot of unwanted movement. Good job. I think you also got good pacing, just clean up those lines in the future.
PS! In the first clip in the airport, you've got some movement there from your top-stage. Either something was loose or it's a bad camera plate.
Posted 19 May 2013 - 03:36 PM
tatort, tatort und nochmal tatort, mehr vielfalt.
du musst lernen die kamera besser zu kontrollieren. man sieht fast alle deine koerperbewegungen, sorry.
Posted 16 June 2013 - 12:05 PM
@ Jens ... Ich weiß das die Vielfalt nicht riesig ist. Aller Anfang ist schwer, mit der Zeit wird es hoffentlich mehr werden . Aber aktuell gibt es nicht viel mehr was ich nutzen darf.